#2: Homecoming: We could issue thingsabout the homecoming how it's changed, how much it costs. The things that are done to be allowed to go to the Homecoming.
#20: Get some good facts and write this story from your view, use headlines, biographs, things to make the story interesting and makes more people wish to read it. We can avoid being obvious if we stray and add little thoughts we have.
#21-27: The second didn't have boring stories in it, it had detail and things maybe a bit boring but it seemed more exciting, the detail and talk of this man's life, especially how lucky he was to finally miss a game that they lost!
#37-A good story tells the reader...
Something new.
Explains what the stor means.
Shows them hunmanity and personality.
Gives the interesting point of view.
#44-Your story must be..
Accurate
Clean and Correct
Smooth
Clear
Tight
Unified
I choose to use smooth because I wish for my stories to flow and make sense, seem as if everything on the story or in it rather is what the story is about. I need to word on that as opposed to doing the other choices due to me trying to go into detail over everything and it get's boring and off track.
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